Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Fix the portions in bold...

1. Yesterday we went to Susan's cabin to play with the dogs.
2. On the trail I found snow,mooses,wolves, overflow, and went threw a white-out.
3. The iditarod trail sled dog race will begin in anchorage, Alaska on March 6, 1999.
4. The iditarod headquarters is located in Wasilla, Alaska.
5. Lynda Plettner is a musher from Big Lake Alaska which is located near Willow.
6. The iditarod race commemorates the serum run from nenana to nome.
7. What do the musher's use to see in the dark?
8. I wonder when I will take my 24 our mandatory layover, said the musher.
9. It was the three veterinarians decision to shipped the dogs back to Anchorage.
10. Wow The Northern Lights is glorious in the sky last night.
11. The swirling snow, ice, and winds caused the mushers to be un able to see.
12. The tallest mountain in north america is called Denali.
13. A incredible new book about huskys and mushing is called, "Born to Pull".
14. Walt Disney made a movie from the book Balto, but we shouldnt overlook the importance of togo.
15. The ending of the book, Stonefox illustrates the lifeskills of perseverance effort caring and friendship.
16. I wonder what would have happen if Kiana had finished the race in day light.
17. There is an old gold mining ghost town called Iditarod.
18. My four dogs Lizzie, M&M, Emmyline, and Sport was dropped off at the white mountain checkpoint.
19. My sled broke and I need new runners a handle, and stanchions.
20. The old dog’s teach the young dog’s how to run together as a teem.
21. Is there a difference between the fir on a White Huskie and the fir on a black and gray Huskie.
22. Has Dr. Herndon checked all the puppy's feet.
23. Don’t play with Rosie my pet Huskie.
24. Were gonna go for a run with a teem of 8 dog’s.
25. I'm gonna get some water for my dog’s, Don said?
26. He gots my boots and Sue gots my boot liners wicking sock’s and woollen sock’s.

Tuesday, October 6, 2009

Grammar, baby

These sentences have some issues that need to be resolved. Rewrite each numbered sentence correctly in your response post. Woo hoo!

1. yesterday we went to susans cabin to played with the dog’s
2. on the trail I founded snow moose wolves overflow and went threw white-out

3. the iditarod trail sled dog race will begun in anchorage alaska on march 6 1999
4. is the iditarod headquarters located in wasilla alaska

5. lynda plettner are a musher from big lake alaska which is located near willow
6. the iditarod race commemorates the serum run from nenana to nome

7. what do the musher use to sea in the dark
8. i wonder when I will take my 24 our mandatory layover said the musher

9. it was the three veterinarians decision to shipped the dog’s back to anchorage
10. wow the northern light’s is glorious in the sky last night

11. the swirling snow ice and winds caused the musher to be un able to sea
12. the tallest mountain in north america is called denali

13. a incredible new book about huskys and mushing is called born to pull
14. walt disney made a movie from the book balto but we shouldnt overlook the importance of togo

15. the ending of the book stonefox illustrates the lifeskills of perseverance effort caring and friendship
16. i wonder what would have happen if kiana had finished the race in day light

17. there is an old gold mining ghost town called iditarod
18. my for dogs lizzie m&m emmyline and sport was dropped off at the white mountain checkpoint

19. my sled broke and I need new runner a handle and stanchions
20. the old dog’s teach the young dog’s how to run together as a teem

21. is there a difference between the fir on a white huskie and the fir on a black and gray huskie
22. has dr herndon checked all the puppys foot

23. don’t play with rosie my pet huskie
24. were gonna go for a run with a teem of ate dog’s

25. im gonna get sum water for my dog’s don said
26. he gots my boots and sue gots my boot liners wicking sock’s and woollen sock’s